It wouldn't work out how? Because to me, it looks fine. I like the way that not only do you have the boys symbolically dressed in black and white (well, cream), the light on Koumyou is warm and bright, whereas Ukoku is more in shadow. The greyness of Koumyou's face is disturbing but makes a viewer think. And I like the squiggle in the bottom right corner - it looks full of nervous energy/anger.
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Date: 2009-01-08 09:20 am (UTC)