IN THIS POST: Timid Bento is very timid.

[naxto]

Um...blame nimblnymph for this. She wanted me to write fic. I suck at this. Please dont kill me Saiyuki fandom! O_O

Title: HAHAAAAAAAAA...you want me to title this? You made a funny! *headdesks*
Rating: um....PG-ish I guess
Time frame: Post Journey
Pairing: Kenren/Sanzo(with past 5/3) tho it probably wont be noticeable in this at all.
Premise:( Feel free to run with this and do a better job then Im about to do with it)Gojyo and Hakkai die fighting Gyumaou. Kenren and Tenpou end up being assigned 'Monkey guard duty' by the Jade Emperor since heaven really wants nothing to do with them. Goku in the meantime has dragged Sanzo to a barn and is trying to guard the heavily injured monk.Said monk no longer has a chakra and Hakkais limiters arent helping his rapidly declining health any-partly because they arent strong enough to contain the youkai Sanzo has become.

Kenren huffed. The frightened villager that had lead them to the old barn on the outskirts of town was now cowering by the door. Tenpou ignored them both to look past the doctor that was trying to get to a certain familiar heavily wounded monk. Unfortunately a near crazed and nearly unlimited though just as heavily injured monkey was getting in the poor old mans way. Gokus limiter was so cracked that both Kenren and Tenpou were amazed that it hadnt fallen apart.

"Oi Monkey! Why dont you let the nice doctor and Ten...er...Hakkai take a look at the monk? Kenren called out.

FUCK...Im sorry this sucks so much! *cowers* Im stuck and its 3am and Im just gonna go hide now.

Comments

[cole-skyheart.livejournal.com]

i used to have the same problem trying to get fanfics started, even originals to go where i wanted. right now i have such the writer's block XP
since its still kind of early...*looks at clock*...wow i slept in...anyway besides that.

only a few punctuation errors that i could see...i usually have to grammar check everything myself on the word processor, so i can't really tell there

but other wise, its starting out good, try and try again, and keep trying after that, and just try and try some more...if that helps any in the ways of motivation

[befanini.livejournal.com]

The hell you say!!!
It DOESN'T suck! D<

It's in fact quite an original idea, and I've read my share of fanfics to say that with absolute authority. *nods*

No arguing! It's off to a good start, the two kamis now in charge of the two youkai has all sorts of possibilities. (Including some very rare and hopefully very hot 53... *.*)

[naxto]

O_O *faints*

[baka-gaijin.livejournal.com]

This is a really great beginning to what could be a monstrously great fic. XD

The idea of youkai Sanzo is spot-on! Surely he's killed enough demons over the course of the journey to qualify.

I would have loved to see more of this.

~ nudges you ~